T2+Narrative

__ Tuesday 12th July __

Editing the Rimu Story

Not Edited: We watched the bus drive away waving to Tommy as he disappeared round a bend.

Edited: We watched the bus drive away ,waving to Tommy as he disappeared round a bend.

__Monday 11th July__

Today in Class I have been working on my Narrative story.

**//My Narrative: Plan//**

**//Setting://** //London City//

**//Complication://** //Lilly’s Dog Chester has a heart problem. The dog has been going to the vet for a few months to have check ups. Chester dies of a heart attack.//

**//Resolution://** //Lilly gets a new dog and names if after Chester’s mother who had died 2 years before Chester. Lilly creates a book about her old dog Chester and compares him to her new dog.//

**//Characters://**
 * //Lily//
 * //Chester - Lily’s First Dog//
 * <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Baylee - Lily’s New Dog//
 * <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Amy - Lily’s Bigger sister//
 * <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Carol - Lily’s Mother//
 * <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//David - Lily’s Father//
 * <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Holly - Lily’s best Friend//
 * <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Katie - Lily’s little sister//
 * <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Jacob - Pet store owner//

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Title://

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Today was the day I was to get my first dog ever who I was to call Chester// <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Today was the day I was to get my first dog ever which was to be called Chester. I scoffed down my RiceBubbles and Yogurt then sprinted to the laundry where mum was loading the dishwasher. Mum, When are we leaving’ I shout, ‘9:00’ mum replies. ‘ I told her that mum, but she didn’t believe me’ giggles Katie my little sister who was always trying to prove she was right.//

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//I wait three extremely slow hours waiting for the call that would say we were going to get my dog. ‘ Five Minutes till we leave’ yells mum in a tone that sounds like she was actually meaning more like 10 minutes than 5. I race to the shoe rack to get my shoes on just incase mum really meant 5 minutes. As I try to shove my foot into my Muddy sneakers that I had played football in the day before Katie comes round the corner. ‘Oh great’ I think to myself while I try hide my foot with the half on shoe hanging off it, but for some odd reason Katie didn't even care that I had shoes on that I shouldn't have, instead she was in a great mood. ‘Come on silly billy, we are going now and your best friend Holly’s coming with us’ she mumbled making sure that she got all her words out before I told her I wasn’t interested, like I usually do.//

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//The car started and within about 8 minutes we were at the pet store.// <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//‘YAY!!! We are there at last’ I scream as well as jumping through the air to give my parents a big hug. My older sister Amy was staring at me with disgust, she never gave mum or dad hugs and she thought that I was being like a child. Holly and Katie however were racing around the store looking for the cutest puppy they could find. ‘This one, no this one, no I think you should get this one’ came the voices of Katie and Holly who for some reason had forgotten that this was for me and I was getting the dog not them.//

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">//Jacob the pet store owner came to me and asked me if I had chosen my dog yet. It took me a few minutes but then without any hesitations I pointed to a ‘ Well groomed, Golden Labrador. ‘ That one “ I declared still with my finger pointing at the dog that I was going to buy//

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">__ Reflection: __ <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Today I found it quite difficult to start my narrative because I was just getting used to working again. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">I found it fun after I had gotten into it and had done the main plan and starter.

<span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">__Thursday 17th June__

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">__**Editing the Rimu Story Chapter 1**__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">•He looked at me strangely again and said in one of his annoyed voices “Sorry but I’ve never seen you in my life and can you please leave my class.

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%; line-height: 22px;">**Edited**: He looked at me strangely again and said in one of his annoyed voices “Sorry but I’ve never seen you in my life so can you please leave my class. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">• “How did I end up with such a goodie good sister who spent more time behaving properly than having fun?” I mumbled to my self. “I was thinking the opposite about you” she said with attitude. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%; line-height: 22px;">**Edited: "**How did I end up with such a goodie good sister who spent more time behaving properly than having fun?" I mumbled to my self.

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">__ Thursday 9th June __

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">This is our prior knowledge of similes displayed as a wordle document. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Definition: Comparing two things that aren't alike by using like or as.

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Examples <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">1.My dog is as fast as a cheater. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">2.The classroom is as small as a microwave. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">3.The sun was as hot as a fire. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Definition: Comparison of two unlike things without signal words such as LIKE and AS <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Examples <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">1.The paintbrush was a magic wand in his hand. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">2.Stars are flowers in the meadow of the sky. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">3.My sister is an angel when she is on her own.

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<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Topic: Identifying Similes <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Directions: Complete the simile by filling in the blank. <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">1. The car was as dirty as a __Pig rolling in the mud__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">2. The candy was like __a rubber chew toy__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">3. His hands were as big as __ a giants __ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">4. My little brother sounds like a __ school bell that won't stop __ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">5. My room is as messy as __pigsty__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">6. School is like __a nightmare in my dreams.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">7. The chair was as hard as a __brick.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">8. Her hair looked like __a stringy messy mat.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">9. The monster’s breath was like __a rotten egg that has been left outside for 1 century__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">10. The water was as cold as __an ice cube melting in my mouth__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">11. My lunch tasted like __the food you would get in prison.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">12. The rabbit was as soft as __soft as a babies bottom.__

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Metaphors <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Metaphors are imaginative ways to describe something by <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">comparing that thing to something else. For example, if I <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">wanted to say that Dan is tall, I could say that Dan is a giant.

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">Use a metaphor to describe somebody who is:

<span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">tall- __ My dad is a giant. __ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">kind- __ Miss Muffet is a caring angel. __ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">fast- __Kennedy is a rocketing Cheater.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">slow- __Bob is a snail.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">smart- __Jimi is a Frankenstein the second.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">fat- __Starlet is a oversized pig.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">sneaky- __Cassie is a sneaky super agent spy.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">angry- __Jack is a angry bull.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">beautiful- __ Miss Stovold is a shimmering diamond. __ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">ugly- __The superhero is a bad scented look.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">stubborn- __Marie is my stubborn sister in disguise.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">short- __Charlie is a dwarf.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">thin- __Jim is a pencil on paper.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">silly- __Tayla is a clown in an act.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">scared easily- __Bobby is a baby with all the fears in the worlds.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">He is a giant- __He is a towering building.__ <span style="font-family: Webdings,sans-serif; font-size: 90%;">She is an angle- __She is a friend from the skies in heaven.__